Thursday, December 9, 2010

saying goodbye

two belligerent
hands chase each other.
tick, tick, tick.

your lips tasted of
pure solitude,
this is the last time.

my fist unclenches
and stretched to meet your back,
i wasn't ready.

I look back to find
the atoms that make your smile
have left the platform.


those are the four haiku i had to write for CW.
all of them had to have a similar theme, and i chose
"saying goodbye" in light of you.
tell me what you think?

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